--- a/docs/index.rst Tue Jun 15 20:10:00 2010 -0400
+++ b/docs/index.rst Tue Jun 15 20:30:23 2010 -0400
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
=======================
hg-review is a `Mercurial <http://hg-scm.org>`_ extension for performing
-distributed code review.
+distributed `code review <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Code_review>`_.
Quickstart
----------
@@ -28,18 +28,14 @@
already got one -- hg-review uses itself for code review.
``cd`` into the directory you cloned hg-review to and initialize the review
-data::
+data, then start the web interface::
cd hg-review
hg review --init
-
-Start the web interface::
-
hg review --web
-Open http://localhost:8080/ in your browser of choice and poke around.
-
-Check out the :doc:`Overview </overview>` when you're ready to learn more.
+Open http://localhost:8080/ in your browser of choice and poke around. Check
+out the :doc:`Overview </overview>` when you're ready to learn more.
User's Guide
------------
--- a/docs/licensing.rst Tue Jun 15 20:10:00 2010 -0400
+++ b/docs/licensing.rst Tue Jun 15 20:30:23 2010 -0400
@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@
If you want to create a program that works with hg-review you should look at
`Mercurial's License FAQ page <http://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/License>`_ to
-learn about how this may affect you.
+learn about how this might affect you.
--- a/docs/overview.rst Tue Jun 15 20:10:00 2010 -0400
+++ b/docs/overview.rst Tue Jun 15 20:30:23 2010 -0400
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
You should read over the :doc:`concepts </concepts>` documentation to make sure
you know how hg-review works, and the :doc:`web interface </webui>`
-documentation for a quick tour of how to use the web ui.
+documentation for a quick tour of how to use the web UI.
Projects without Existing Code Reviews
''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
hg review --init --remote-path URL
-The ``URL`` should be the URL of the review repo you just created.
+The ``URL`` should be the *public* URL of the review repo you just created.
This will create a local review data repo for you, as well as an ``.hgreview``
file in your project. You need to commit this ``.hgreview`` file to your
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
You should read over the :doc:`concepts </concepts>` documentation to make sure
you know how hg-review works, and the :doc:`web interface </webui>`
-documentation for a quick tour of how to use the web ui.
+documentation for a quick tour of how to use the web UI.
Reporting Bugs
--------------