# HG changeset patch # User Steve Losh # Date 1483893731 0 # Node ID 694cf6c40aacfd1d18319a75e09d65f52f7579ea # Parent 900f5f65dc328c185744108ca9d68897c2a610e8 Final flavor tweaks diff -r 900f5f65dc32 -r 694cf6c40aac data/fabrics.lisp --- a/data/fabrics.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:34:19 2017 +0000 +++ b/data/fabrics.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:42:11 2017 +0000 @@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ ("an" "angora") ("an" "argyle") ("a" "ballistic nylon") - ("a" "barathea") ("a" "barkcloth") ("a" "bizarre silk") ("a" "broadcloth") diff -r 900f5f65dc32 -r 694cf6c40aac src/entities/clothing.lisp --- a/src/entities/clothing.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:34:19 2017 +0000 +++ b/src/entities/clothing.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:42:11 2017 +0000 @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ article fabric (random-elt *singular-clothes*)) - (format nil "a set of ~A ~A" + (format nil "a pair of ~A ~A" fabric (random-elt *plural-clothes*))))) diff -r 900f5f65dc32 -r 694cf6c40aac src/entities/food.lisp --- a/src/entities/food.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:34:19 2017 +0000 +++ b/src/entities/food.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:42:11 2017 +0000 @@ -54,6 +54,7 @@ "like something your father used to make" "like something your mother used to make" "musty" + "oily" "okay" "pretty nice" "questionable" diff -r 900f5f65dc32 -r 694cf6c40aac src/entities/ruin.lisp --- a/src/entities/ruin.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:34:19 2017 +0000 +++ b/src/entities/ruin.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:42:11 2017 +0000 @@ -7,6 +7,8 @@ #("give up" "why me?" "tom <3 alice" + "beth <3s jane" + "annie+don" "dave was here" "420" "goodbye" @@ -25,12 +27,17 @@ #("Maybe there's something useful left." "You're surprised it's still standing." "Maybe it's worth taking a look." + "It looks ready to collapse." "Perhaps you should scavenge?" "You have a bad feeling about it." "It brings back fond memories." "The walls are crumbling." + "The floor is cracked and uneven." + "Sunlight shines through holes in its roof." "Sickly-looking leaves cover its walls." "It looks like someone has been here recently." + "A bleached skeleton leans against it." + "You notice a fire pit inside. Someone has rested here." "The walls are charred from a fire." "A small animal scurries into a hole under the wall." "Your parents used to live near one of these." diff -r 900f5f65dc32 -r 694cf6c40aac src/flavor.lisp --- a/src/flavor.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:34:19 2017 +0000 +++ b/src/flavor.lisp Sun Jan 08 16:42:11 2017 +0000 @@ -26,7 +26,11 @@ (defun feeling () (format nil "You suddenly have ~A feeling.~2%~A" - (random-elt #("a good" "a bad" "a worrying" "a hopeful" "an uneasy")) + (random-elt #("a good" + "a bad" + "a worrying" + "a hopeful" + "an uneasy")) (random-elt #("It passes after a moment." "It lingers for a while.")))) @@ -38,7 +42,7 @@ "stiff wind" "strong wind")) (random-elt #("moves" "pushes")) - (random-elt #("hot" "warm" "sticky" "humid"))) + (random-elt #("hot" "warm" "sticky" "humid" "wet"))) (random-elt #("It begins to drizzle." "The wind picks up, pushing you around." "A cool wind blows from the north." @@ -49,6 +53,6 @@ (defun random-flavor () (let ((r (random 1.0))) - (cond ((< r 0.20) (animal)) - ((< r 0.30) (feeling)) + (cond ((< r 0.33) (animal)) + ((< r 0.50) (feeling)) (t (weather)))))